Raw LLM Responses

"Hey, AI, can you read through these 5 pages I just wrote and give me some feedback, take into account the previous discussions on this script and make sure it all makes sense" Want a real life example? Me: *In the last Jedi, the line "somehow Palpatine returned" is said by Poe. Could you rewrite this scene with some better dialog?* ChatGPT4: **INT. RESISTANCE BASE - BRIEFING ROOM** *A hologram of Palpatine flickers to life, causing a murmur of surprise and fear to spread throughout the room. Poe Dameron, Rey, and Finn exchange glances before Poe steps forward, his face etched with concern.* **POE** I can't believe it... It seems the Emperor has come back from the dead. **FINN** But how? We saw the Death Star explode... We thought he was gone for good. **REY** He's managed to cling to the dark side, using its power to cheat death. We can't underestimate him, not again. **POE** The Emperor's return poses a great threat to the galaxy. We have to act swiftly to put an end to his evil reign once and for all. *The room falls silent as the gravity of the situation sinks in. The Resistance knows they face a monumental challenge.* Already an improvement where chatgpt could have saved the Last Jedi.